Seven Seas Magazine

February 2004 Issue - Essay # 9

 

It's Coming Along

By Diane Payne

 



After many teary days of looking for an affordable place to live in Flagstaff, I rented a trailer, though my friends called it a "generic beer can." I had never lived in the mountains before, but I was ready to plant everything: flowers, vegetables, herbs, and whatever else came my way, anything to cover up the shoddiness of my aluminum home. There was plenty of rain and sunshine, everything I needed to get a garden going.     

It wasn't long after I started digging my garden when friends dropped by to watch, expressing fears filled with gloom and doom, positive it'd snow before the seedlings appeared.  Still, they always left with a glimmer of hope, saying, "It's coming along."    

And coming along it was. I planted new seeds every day and placed marigolds and pansies all along the boundaries.  Then I’d sit beside my garden, admiring the flowers, pleased with the hard work, eagerly awaiting the seeds to sprout.  

I had started my seeds in little peat moss containers and stored them in plastic bags beneath the bathroom sink.  My hardened, mountain neighbors looked as me if I was a desert rat with no idea about weather, a flatlander who knew nothing about elevation, a gardening fool who knew nothing about gardens.  But, they were wrong.  I had studied up on plants.  It was August and I was preparing for my fall garden.     

Within a couple of days of being planted, I noticed the sun had fried the marigolds.  While mourning the loss of my flowers, I remembered the seeds I had started beneath the sink and was relieved to find new seedlings. Neither the plants nor I were giving up.  The sun took a beating on my flowers, but there were new seedlings to plant.      

One afternoon, we had an incredible windstorm.  Peering out the window, I watched boards and aluminum flying through the sky.  After the storm was over, I ran outside and witnessed the havoc wrecked on my pansies.  Even the hardiest of plants couldn't withstand this wind.  Still, I planted more seedlings and wished them well.  

When friends came for dinner, they looked at my garden and sighed. Adamant, I said they'd have fresh tomatoes and beans in no time.  How could anyone go wrong with onions or beets?  They ate my dinner and smiled politely.  Before leaving, they wished my garden well, and said their faithful farewell greeting: "It's coming along."   But, I could tell they were certain they'd never eat a fresh beet or onion from my garden.       

"This is the Hospice Garden," I confessed as they were leaving.  "This is what happens to plants.  They come.  They go."  

"But yours don't seem to last long," Geoffrey said.     

"What is long?" I asked.     

"Oh, well, it's coming along," Mary answered, wanting to spare me any hurt feelings.        

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Late September, our first snow fell, and friends came out to ski. After skiing through the forest, we returned to my garden, the garden that had seemed so dismal just one day before, and admired how beautiful it had become with all the drooping flowers and vegetables blanketed by snow, resting peacefully, free of all the burdened effort required to simply survive.  Though no one really said anything, somehow the garden became a celebration for all of us as we quietly recognized just how far the garden had come along.  It was a personal celebration done in unison, a lot like gardening and salad making, and watching the moon, and feeling the seasons change. A lot like being lost in memories while surrounded by friends.     

The plants were suddenly released to do their own snow dance, grateful to have until next spring before being prodded and turned. And I was equally relieved to have a season free of this emotional gardening, a season to be awake while so many hibernate, a season to simply ski down snow-covered roads.       

   

 

Author's Biography

Diane now lives in Arkansas but a part of her longs to be back in Flagstaff.

Diane is faculty advisor for the Foliate Oak and they are seeking submissions at:  www.uamont.edu/foliateoak 

E-mail Diane at diane_payne@hotmail.com  

Editor's Note, August 2004: Diane's first novel, "Burning Tulips," was just published by Red Hen Press. Check it out!

 

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